wow i would try bringing back more of your focal looks to me u smudged it all out except the head and arm . the c4d is fine and i would also try making focal a bit larger and work on lighting a bit more try to folow the light on the render or stock aLready
kiu m8


oops didnt see v2 and v2 is way better gj m8 kiu only thing is the animation is a bit distracting and confusing .