this is actually very nice, but i feel you could have done more to create flow, its very nice you followed the colour scheme and the bokeh you added was sexeh
I see you trying to use blur and sharpening and you have created a nice focal but on them circle things i think the blur is slightly overdone.
I think the text needs some improvement but its getting there, i would mention that you kern some of your text by pressing "alt+ left or right key", which would split the text because between where the letters "light" the g and h need kerning.