My first thought was you mixed these two in some kind of a combo using the C4d, my bad :|
The first i like it, effects are overall great, and the depth is awesome, could've done better on the lighting tho.
Second one the text is way too distracting and too much empty space. ITs a good effect you did on the side of the face it goes really good.
But again lighting could be better.
Kiu m8 ♥