wow i love the colours here, very diff !! Your doing a great job creating depth and it has some good flow, but there is a little flow lost in the c4d blured below him, maybe angle it just a little more instead of just running strait across the bottom.
Text in the perfect place imo, just a little big, as is your tag :P it's more boxed shape than rectangle, very odd :P
KIU Wise , lookin jawsome ^^