Boredom...

[KroniiK]

[Xelo]

the focal dissapears and doesn't stand out enough... you blended it in to much lol.
colors are to monotone.

text i find to large and also i'd place it near her forhead. read tut's to improve your work.
there are plenty of tuts on this site (also on text)

kiu!!

[Slave]

Difference should be appreciated. It's a pretty different looking style an thats a bonus, though I do feel the focal is lost in the fog, maybe bring back a little more of the face from the blend so we get a more clear vision of this master piece ^^