alright looks great for your third(?) attempt! I would like to bump Gen's answer on this one, smudge behind her in the opposite direction of her gaze. Also, I would burn the bottom left and the top right corners and try to get a "ray of light" effect on the face. Then throw a galaxy stock on top with soft light and opacity of your choice. then a border and that's all I can think of atm. You've def. got the eye, you just need to practice putting it to your work. Nice work and l8er days!