First sig in two years..

[Gropemaster]

cnc, i think i still got it a bit :P rusty tho

and i usually don't do this style

[BigCookies]

I'm not liking the C4D work too crazy of colors
Render looks less than HQ
The text also didn't help

[BigCookies]

To fix the C4D 2 options
1.Change the color blur or blend it a little
2.Get a whole new C4D Make it go according to the colors look like Green(on the board)black
For the render
1. i believe you can blur it and it may look better
As far as text i like the Font but not the colors well the green is good make the reddish to black.
See how it looks Good Luck

[Gropemaster]

appreciate the cnc, to be honest i was pretty high when i made this. But i assure you the next one i showcase will show how i really make sigs :P

[Derosion]

The colors could work, but if I'm not mistaken, did you smudge something?
That's probably what's throwing it off.

The colors could work if you cleaned up this piece and made the focal a bit bigger.
Try some pentooling techniques.