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    The smudging on the arm kind of kills it. Along with the text. Doesn't look like much was done here. Lacks depth and flow as well.
    Last edited by Fork; 02-07-2011 at 04:50 PM.

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    smudging looks pretty good in some places .I see u used a stock for your bg? and i think it fits the theme. very well smudging on the head looks decent blends well into the bg.
    The depth could be better, but not too bad of a sig m8 kiu good use of colors.
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    thanks ima do a v2 soon without the text and darkening and dodging some areas

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    Nice one, good concept. Needs better contrast and lighting and that text could go.

    Render would be better smaller to get more details of it.
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    text isn't too nice, lighting could use some work.

    Fits together very nicely apart from the text though, looks very natural.




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    the smudge on his left arm is distracting and its a bit too plane add some c4d bubbles. and text placement is on the wrong place looks nice tho ,a gift to Forsaken?

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