the bg looks reallife where as the render is of a game idk if its a stock or not but it looks weird
and if you would have used another c4d instead of that one itd look better as this c4d.. just doesnt fit in either and the light source is too overpowering ( and steals the focal away a bit for me )
text is also just off the focal... i like the font of it though
youve done better lol