WEll good render, back colour choice for bg imo, usually you make wicked ass bg, so I can tell you wren't feeling this one too much.

Nutter does the pop out of box thing too :P

love the squiggle effects in the bg you make yourself ? Why don't you use more of those in the foreground than these hard strong long lashes ?

Around his waist makes it look liek he went a little too far on a diet :P take out the long slashes an add some more touching effects and change the bg colour to soemthing more earthy an I thik this one could ahve a better updo ^^

Why don't you mess around with the liquid tool on your render and or your squiggle lines an see what pops out at you ?