Sacrifice

[wrftw]

Well tried something new for me here. From what i see, depth and detail could be better. I'm kinda rushed it towards to end. Text also needs some work maybe. But i kinda tried to achieve somehow dramatic look here. And give the feel which is like in a horror movie, when main character walks in a dark room, and you know that there is something in it but you cant help it. That kind of thing. Dunno give me some CC.

[Manga]

Edit: There we go.

I don't really like the fact that it has 2 focals, a bit distracting. No blend really. The blocks don't make sense. I see little depth. Not loving the lighting. And it is really dark. There is no flow.

[wrftw]

Ah okay. Everyone has their opinions.

[Manga]

Ah okay. Everyone has their opinions.

Yeah sorry, know that wasn't what you were looking for.

[wrftw]

I'm kinda looking for tips for this style. Not like cc about the style. Any tips about improving. All things you said was just about the style mostly. I hope you get what i mean. Thanks for it though

[Gallagher]

My only complaints, and they sort of follow suit with your own are that the brightness seems to be shadowed over, no bright whites, that's more of a personal peeve, but I thought that I would mention it if only to appease myself. Also, I don't particularly like the text or those lines / dots (?) and the cut off on the left seems sudden.
It's an interesting tag and I respect that you tried something new and deviated from your comfort zone, just not my cup I suppose.

[wrftw]

Ya thanks Gallagher. I see that i kinda screwed the mosaic on the left. Thanks.

[wrftw]

Bump.

[Muffin]

crappy text
the mosaics in the left are just random
blending is way poor

gj btw

[edwinpabito]

i find it really nice especially the texture..KIU