Quote Originally Posted by Derosion View Post
Lighting and text are both very poor.

Your text is auto-distracting and the soft brush lighting is ruining the actually definition of lighting and the appeal of the signature.

Your focal is too big.
You lack effects, therefore nothing pops out which brings down your depth.

The lightning looks horrid, remove it asap.

Kiu.
THANK YOU! I was wondering why my lightning looked bad, it was on a soft brush! But without the lightning, it is too empty, well, i guess i will work on that now