Jawsome Poetry Slam voting Slave vs Domino

[Xelo]

pffww.. this is difficult!

Domino: very nice flow and good choice of high-words (is that what you call that?), but maybe a bit to pompous..

Slave: Chaotic (I find that charming) flow and use off common words (wich makes it more easy to follow)

I apreciate both styles! damn this is hard!
Being mentioned in Slave's poem makes me to biased.. she gmv.

[cc.RadillacVIII]

DMN rmv, short, snappy and easy to take in, on top of that filled with love.

[cC.DOMINO™]

pffww.. this is difficult!

Domino: very nice flow and good choice of high-words (is that what you call that?), but maybe a bit to pompous..

Slave: Chaotic (I find that charming) flow and use off common words (wich makes it more easy to follow)

I apreciate both styles! damn this is hard!
Being mentioned in Slave's poem makes me to biased.. she gmv.

pretty much, ya well thx. thx rad meant to be that way.

[Ebrithil]

dom get my vote, the meter and rythm of the poem are better, as well as the lexical choice.

[Slave]

Congrats Domino it was a very well made and lovely poem to read

p.s ^^

[cC.DOMINO™]

thx slave for that and for the battle we will rematch soon. Glad you liked it at least, I knew it would make you cry when I was writing it

I originally started writing a eulogy for you as if you had died by my words. here is what I had started off with,
Slave's death eulogy lol

Through the hazy cloud of faded anonymity
She unmasked her heart with humbled tranquility
The quiet Beauty with no excuse
The one we all could call our muse
When all the words were said and done
Our beloved friend had come and gone

If trouble striked she saved the day
with no fear of death she paved the way
The wreched pain without her presence
darkens my soul my mind my essence
I can't believe I feel this way
The best has come and gone away

The love we lost will still remain
She lived she loved she felt our pain
From dusk till dawn her spirit pervailed
Her Endless creativity had never failed
I wish you all could rant and rave
About the one they all called Slave


I tweaked it and played with it till I got what I liked, went for more of a upbeat poem about birth instead of death.

[Ishamz]

I cant believe im actually reading a poem, both are really good but i enjoyed reading Dom's more tbh.
I know the competition is over but just felt like letting u guys know ur good lol