Another try

[DarkStar]

Got done playing some GTA and I was bored, so here it is.

[ROTD]

nah take off the render to the right and add some vectoring or preset shapes in photoshop its reaally plain atm

[DarkStar]

this is a nooby question, but what exactly is vectoring?

[ROTD]

look in my signature atm... its smooth shapes made with the pen tool or some other form of design to make images/logos etc. marquees shapes just about any smooth figure is a vector

[DarkStar]

Here's the update:

[Samuel]

Maybe a few more vectors? Looks nice tho. Move the family first text. I like the render alot. Bg is kinda boring too.

[DarkStar]

I made the BG boring because I wanted the render to stand out, his eyes bug me :P . I moved the family first text, and it looks good.

This is the final product

[Samuel]

Looks better. I like the placement of the text better. Good work mate.