Outlander Tag

[Defuze]

Very beautiful, doom and sorrow, but very bright and overpowering.

I would suggest one thing, and danno how well it would work or not, but what about darkening up the bottom right side of this tag more and burning a little of he bg of the smoke, just to give it a little more texture.

The man sees the destruction in front and knows there is nothing behind, thus he continues to move forward in hopes to find the true light once again.

Thanks for the tips I will try soon, and also for the bottom right burn do you mean the left because the right is fairly dark.