Earthrise

[Provided]

Cnc pretty please

[cC.ShorterGFX]

I like it Nice depth, flow and effects. I think the text kinda spoils it but thats just my opinion. I think you should darken the edges to give more attention to your focal. Overall i think you done a good job.

[NomNom]

text is bad but i cant think of another flaw, maybe lighting....

[Liquid]

needs a light source and the text needs some work, background is sexy, i think if you used different c4d's with this style it would come out smoother, kiu imo you have a good start

[Provided]

Thanks all. I'll probably do a v2 today, if have the time.
I'm having exams next week so I don't have that much free time, unfortunately.

[Provided]

V2:

Better?
I gave up on text though. I tried for half an hour, but everything just looked so bad. Which is a shame because I think this really could use some text.

[edwinpabito]

yeah its better...maybe try to darken the sides....where did you get those wire thingies can i have them plox

[Liquid]

kinda looks the same to be honest, try using diff c4d's on this flow is nice, colors are nice, no text looks better imo

[Provided]

@Edwin: Eureka, found them.
Here you go, http://www.megaupload.com/?d=8D9WY4E3
I repacked them though as I don't have the original pack anymore. For rendering, check the channels.

@Liquid: That's because I didn't change all that much. And tbh I don't plan to, I kinda like it like this. But still thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to keep it in mind, as I plan to stick with the same style for my next sig with the render I got from you