Encounter: Slaves Other Reality

[Slave]

This was made as a tag for a battle on another forum.
This is my second abstract I've ever made and there is no c4d/fractals in thie one, so w/e you see in effects is all me ^^. Also the orbs were also made by me and not taken from another piece of art.

I know it's kind of blurish, but I was gong for something taboo, and mysterious, do you run or do you move closer and end up snared ?





c&c would be wonderful, this is after all a learning process still and nothing is mastered, gimme food for thought please

[cs4pro]

The only thing that I think you can do to improve this is sharpen the orbs in the front and blur the orbs at the back of the signature. So that you create a better depht. But that's just one little thing, other then that it's a great piece of work, smooth and good looking......I voted for you keep it up Slave

[Slave]

Thanks bro ^^ I had the same idea about blurin up some of the orbs, but went against is because i had such a hazish b/g already and the drop also had a hazish blur glow, will tyr it next time tho and see what comes out ^^

[Slave]

kind of annoying, on the other site it looks more blurish then it is >.< here on Void is what it actually looks like in my ps, but oh well.

[cc.mio]

I like your style, but this one is.. not best..
Well smudging is random, also orbs.. it will look better with one orb as focal and a few small orbs around..
also some color adjustment will be needed here (more vibrant cyan on some parts of work)
next thing I do not like is size.. it's unnecessary too big.. widescreen look, will make it perfect..
Thats all for now..

[Slave]

Interesting mio, I didn't want it to look uniform, but I wanted it to take up lots of space, I tried this size because everyone always see's the same size from me so I thought I'd try something new :P In no way to I prefer a box over a rec, but I thought this was the time to try new things.

I'll check out the more vibrant before I host on DA to see if I like thanks mio

[sirenzo]

it's cool like i said before to you i stand by what i said already it still too blurry for me but i must agree dose look more sharper here then on sr , tho i think u can improve it more and the concept is pretty neat it still looks like a in between dimension between worlds. like u would see in an anime .

[cC.Tudor]

The blurriness is my only complaint. Id love to see this, like Mio said, in a widescreen format.

<3

[Slave]

Will do ppl, after my homework is done I'll toss in a V2, thanks folks for all the advice <3

list: clean up some blur, blur some orbs, cyn it up more and longer length shorter height ^^