Well that's a lot better, but now the sky looks as if it's in different segments. Kind of like a vector. So fix that and try work on the woman's back. It's blurred to much which is very distracting. Good job on the depth and colour correction though Now you could maybe start adding little details which are very important. For example, you could start adding things into the far background and blur them to increase depth and detail. Things like that.
Good work.