Fail Much?

[Lewk]

needs some more colouring.. on his shoulder, you need something there. like a small c4d or clipping mask.

[wrftw]

Thanks.

[Liquid]

your c4d spam killed the depth in this one sorry man

[Misery]

Put a light source top right, too much C4D, looks plain.
6/10

[Downfall]

Put a light source top right, too much C4D, looks plain.
6/10

lightsource should be from the left look at the face