lol um hey man i like what u was going for here,
things i liked .
lighting looks pretty good here as well .
the colors are nice a bit dark but looks good.
things can be fixed
depth could use some work .
i think what can be done to fix it is maybe re move some of the c4ds, not all and maybe tone down on the sharpness.

i will leave the rest of the cnc to res of the crew best of luck and keep doing what u doing .