hey downfall i like the concept of this tag man .
I like what you did with the eyes of this you objective was to be a painting ? and someone looking through it or just the painting it self looking at you with her eyes,

Things id fix maybe .
would be a bright lighting on it seems a bit too dark . and maybe a nice picture frame around it might bring the peice out more .

Things i noticed .
i noticed you got some really nice depth and the use of the texture works well with this tag .

things i would try doing .
try make her eyes stand out more lighten up the picture with filter light effects
hope to see a v2 on this tag best of luck m8.