this bg is really nice bro but the focal dose not fit it try a different focal or just try making an abstract out of your bg .
was a great attempt but i agree was a bit of a fail but then again not a fail
your trying new things which is great because only then u will find a new style for u self with more trial and error ive tossed a bunch out, when doing trial and errors in photo shop so don't give up m8 keep trying new thins and testing out all your tools in Photoshop.