That render is A world of Warcraft render of the character Illidan Stormrage.

Now, about the tag istself. I think you are getting better, cut you have to work on a few things. First off try adding some depth to your tags using maybe a c4d or background instead of an enlarged version of the render. Although this may look good on some tags, it doesn't always work. Also, try working a bit with your blending and lighting. The tag seems to become a part of the background right now. If you blur the background somewhat it will help to make the render the focal point, and help it not blend in. Overall you are getting better so KIU.