I'm digging your style but it's just not executed as well here as I've seen from you in the past.

The c4d's used here are so dark that you can barely make out any shapes unlike the awesome soul eater one your in signature at the moment. This means that all that's left are some glowing orbs and a render. There's a lot of lighting present on the render that doesn't seem to have a source in the arm/shoulder and head area.

I suggest you try and blend in the daredevil a bit and make the light from the orbs visible on him or make them act as a source for the lighting allready present. Perhaps lighten it up a bit but as you mentioned its a request and they wanted it dark. Keep it up!