The lighting is overly sharp and the swirly effects draw attention to the right half of the tag even though the focal is on the left.
Not the best I've seen from you but as you mentioned you were trying out some things.
The stock itself is a bit awkward in my opinion as there's a double focal and the pop-out thing with the machete in my humble opinion rarely works.
Offtopic: dead island looks like it could be pretty sweet.