I like the idea, but IMO it needs a little more work to it. First off, to me the lighting on the girl and the surrounding area is way off. She is really creepy dark; while, the area around it is dark, but not as dark. I think it would give it a better over all effect if you had the background darker. It would add more drama and it would also make the artwork look colder;which, I would assume is what you are going for. Another thing I noticed was the "ice" on the feet. IMO I would erase it there. The feet part seems a little off. The effects on the feet just look odd and, personally, I do not like them. Also, one thing to me seems off is the girl. I think how she is positioned on the bridge markers her look bigger than she is because to me she seems a little too big compared to everything else and she is just a little girl. Also, I think this would look pretty cool. Maybe add like almost a snow look effect to the girl and just like around her. By snow look I just mean add snow. Another small thing is, fix the left chain to the swing. It is way too transparent. I can hardly see it. I do like this, but IMO it seems a little unfinished.