Thanks for the feedback fur, you are right, it is unfinished, but I wanted to hand it in before the due date so I am pressured for time.

I really love the snow idea, and I think that might very well be the touch I was missing, I wantedto add rain for more effect but when I did that I felt it was too messy.

Yes I also felt she was a bit on the larger side, but she isn't so much a little girl as like a teen. I also felt that the area was dominating too much of the picture for my liking when I had her smaller.
I also agree with you that the surrounding area is much lighter, I tried going darker but I felt like it made it look like I was hiding soemthing, when in fact that was the exact ops. Once the snow is in, perhaps that will help me illuminate more but darken up the rest kinda thing

I made the left chain look more transparent because I tried to add more of a shine to it, maybe I'll take that out or work harder on it >.< we will see.

Top priority now will be the snow and darkening the area more
Without the blue on her feet you can hardly see the effect, same goes for both sides of her legs, I have this tearing/leaking affect to it but you can't see if at all because the b/g and it's coloue of her
I'll make a v2 without the blue on feet when i fix up the snow and see what everyone thinks.
Thanks fur^^<3