Quote Originally Posted by JoShO View Post
Too messy :/
Add some adjustments in and it could get there. The blending just seems to be the render erased, and so it's gotten rid of the depth. The FX on the left looks good, but the right side is just a mess of random stuff really.
Also the Chip Da Ripper really doesn't suit it there, or being white etc. (I'm ignoring the JDFX, no comment )
Thanks for the critique! I posted it knowing the right side would get ripped apart. I wasn't sure what to do with it so I wanted to hear some input. Lol at the text I literally did just slap it on there. I did put a lot of effects on the right of the render just because in the render it cut his arm off lol. When I get some more feedback I'll go back without a lazy attitude!