Quote Originally Posted by JoShO View Post
Not bad, I like the flow, the text is a bit misplaced and there's no actual background. Add a texture or a few suitable c4ds to make the background more exciting, but not too much to take away the focal (the render).

Typography seems to be my weakest and the use of c4d actually. Thanks a lot
Quote Originally Posted by Manga View Post
What did you do to your focal? Seems so sharp ....... as in you sharpened it, a lot.
And the effects on him are weird.
Hmm, you may be right though. I think I sharpened it.... too much.