my immediate reaction is that I'm drawn to the text in 4 of the 9 on that wall instead of your actual focal. The text shouldn't be the first thing I see. If text is going to ruin your signature, don't put it. Also, no need to put "made by lightyear8684", it kind of bothers me. You still need to be working on the basics a lot. EG: depth, lighting, flow, quality, colors, etc