First vertical tag, CnC please!

[+Nyaa]

I lost a bit of quality somewhere along the line, but it's still alright.
The top right gap did have "S E D U C T I V E" with kerning 200 looking flash up there, but then I didn't like it so I got rid of it. Looks cleaner like this in my opinion..

What are your thoughts?

[JoShO]

Way too simple imo.
I'm not sure if it's the same with vertical sigs but like, the render fills the whole canvas, only leaving you with things covering the render as foreground effects, and barely any room to do effects behind the render.

I also think the tag itself should be slightly longer? Looks short.

[Linda]

it has nice lightening ,and i like the blurred c4d in the front, gives it depth, tho you could burn it a little, also the right side, for more depth, but it's ok, maybe next time xD
I think it's awesome sig, and you did great job, but next time use smaller c4d for more details , or it will look bit way to simple, just for the future

[kHaoZ]

You should give yourself more room for foreground effects next time.

[+Nyaa]

Thanks for all the advice everyone

[Vortex-]

i like it great depth and lightning man

[Atelier]

just needz moar sauce bro <3

[+Nyaa]

What else should I have added??