Dark and Light Pill LPs

[+s9.Oath]

Dark
http://htaorednu.deviantart.com/#/d4fqw91

and

Light
http://htaorednu.deviantart.com/#/d4fqwh2

made all in c4d used the GSG light kit pro

[wrftw]

they lack aesthetic value like most of your stuff. not bad things at all but they are scrapped wips imo

[kidmed]

It looks a bit too clean and scattered - without a purpose. Try doing something creative with what you've made (angle/perspective, placement, colours).

Small detail: although it looks like the coloured parts of the pills are slightly transparent, you cannot see the black part through it.

(watermark is also in the way =P)

[cC.Remember♥Me]

the lamps don't cause any lighting? o.O

[Kinetics]

I feel like you can do way better than this, and i kind of agree with WR, it kind of feels like a WIP, kiu though