Goosa 23 imo is the best. I think you have the right idea and make some really good choices in some cases, but in others I think you miss special points to really bring out your talent.

Some of these tags are flat and lack depth, thought most of your colouring is pretty good on them.
The ones you used c4d's with, like your goosa one, the c4d colours don't match upto your focal.

I have a tutorial I made that gives a couple tricks on how to change the colours of your render/c4ds' etc.
http://elleaeve.deviantart.com/galle...73071#/d3i2q6x
It's here on this forum too, but I can;t be bothered atm to hunt it down xD

Keep it up, keep playing with your tools and follow your flow with your focals as you have been so far and I'm sure we will see some master pieces come from you