Apologies for my somewhat harsh criticism..

What I should have said was.

Your background is too blurry in comparison to your foreground this gives a false sense of extreme depth which isnt neccessary and kills the composition.
The colours were too bright for my liking because they are very garish and I personally dont like overly saturated pieces. They strain my eyes and its hard to see something to make it stand out.
The text was at a horrid angle though. It was hard to read and killed the flow of the piece.