Try at some smudging

[MrSdr]

Not so great at it yet but i tried,
CnC please

[Ill_Method]

Purrty colors, the smudge is sloppy, but it could also be interpreted as abstract so it kinda works IMO. I like it, I would keep at this Just blend the render in better around the edges, it kinda sticks out too much.

[Lewk]

fix the vertical lines that aren't seamless, they're ugly, just smudge them in some more and smudge in some neony couloured streaks

[Vicious Zen]

I'd agree on smudging the vertical lines, and some neon smudges would be nice.
Also, whatever that is that's bouncing against her cheek is bugging the crap out of me. I guess it's part of the stock, but it just looks out of place. Pretty good work, keep it up.

[Synsational]

I like the smudges on the 2nd one quite a bit, looks natural like it was designed like that.

The first one is a bit all over the place, but good job. :]

[leemf]

nice sig sean
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