Funky Fresh

[BuBBlez]

Really old tag I made. Thanks to Rad`s tutorial, this was at the time when I first started learning how to make tags.

[cc.RadillacVIII]

My funky old tut hehe http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showth...ature-Tutorial

The angle and flow is great. The dots in the background creates a good depth. I really like the clip mask rectangle but it would look so much better if it were closer to Travie, like it's popping out behind him. Text could be improved by keeping the two words closer to each other. The overall colors of the tag could be more vibrant, seems a bit washed out atm.
Last but not least you overused topaz clean, lower the opacity a bit.

Fresh shit yo!

[BuBBlez]

lol Thanks for the tips man! I really like this type of style, might use it on a different render in the near future

[cc.RadillacVIII]

You're welcome and I will look forward to see you take this style to the next level

[.Void]

Overkill topaz.

[BuBBlez]

Overkill topaz.

I look at your current signature, along with your comment and say, "How Ironic".

[.Void]

I look at your current signature, along with your comment and say, "How Ironic".

Mine is at 28%, yours looks like it is at 100%. No need to get mad.