The focal is way to covered by c4d spam, and there is just way too much negative space, tag is way too monochromatic. And I'm not sure what the orb on the left is but it's really low quality and pulls away from the render itself.
the "orb" is the light source :\ and i was going for a monochrome feel. But i realize that the render is pretty hard to pick out.as for negative space, im not seeing much o.o
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The orb is way to dull to be the light source try setting the Orb layer to screen or color dodge. Negative space was the wrong phrase on my part, the whole left side of the tag is just full of C4D spam which isn't very aesthetic. You might want to look up some tutorials on C4D placement and usage.
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