Here is something i worked on for a while, plz dont pay attention to how low quality the picture is, it was too big to scan. As for critique, go for it just keep in mind that it is my first charcoal peice and im 16 so im not incredibly experienced, im just starting out.
Ik the grid shows up -.- i made it way too dark
already well have at it

http://i1061.photobucket.com/albums/...7/SUNP0051.jpg