i dont know lol

[Shniper1337]

Posting "It's bad" isn't critiscism! It's your personal opinion.

Look up CONSTRUCTIVE criticism!

thank you

I personally kind of agree with h3rald, and I think you're taking it poorly, Shniper.

He didn't JUST say it was bad, he said you need to practice using a simpler focal point, like a render.

I looked through your previous posts at your "1000s of tags", and you're not some professional graphics artists. You have some good tags, but looking at stuff like previous smudge work you've done, and even your tags with renders, you still need to work on lighting/depth/composition.

The reason we say this is that when you do an abstract piece, the ONLY thing people see are these elements. All we have to look at is the lighting, the depth, the composition, the flow. In tags with renders you can practice these things, but you get help from a render. Renders are generally already lit, have some direction of flow, and are easier to create depth around. Stick to tags -with- renders, but start using more abstract styles to put the tag together, and slowly move into something more abstract. Making a tag from scratch with no recognizable renders and have it looking good isn't easy.

Ik im not amazing and i wasnt trying to come across as rude, but when i post something and ask for critique i want to know what people think of that tag, and why they think that so i know how to improve. I realize that he gave a tip about the renders, but if hes going to tell me his opinion on the tag i want to know how i can change it so that it looks nicer. This is how people get better, by gettting multiple peoples opinions and developing a style based on that, and learning better ways to incorporate lighting and such in better ways due to what others tell them. While telling me to use a render is a tip, it is not that helpful.