This looks very, very similar to your previous.

Like I said in your last post, this is okay, especially for someone new, but you should really jump in and work on some tutorials. You're lacking in a lot of techniques than can bring a tag to new heights, like lighting, blending, depth.. Don't just stick to making sigs some way that you came across and think you'll do great, work on a bunch of different styles, especially when you're this new, you'll learn.