new sig

[dillinger]

update...

new look for me c/c please..

[Distello]

Haha I love this render and you've used it brilliantly in this piece. I can see your starting to experiment more with your canvas sizes and thats a very good thing!
I would however ditch the border on this, I like the dark-light radial gradient kind of effect you've got going on there and the border kind of detracts from it, almost smoothing it out...

As for the tag itself I think its great that your starting to find the ins-and outs of the program, am I right in thinking thats a smudge background? You've got the colours right and a good sense of difference between light and dark areas. On that note I don't think the way you have attempted to create depth by blurring one side and sharpening the other -is working, with a flat background like that theres not really any depth coming through.

Some areas are also quite harsh and oversharpened like that spot in the left, it kind of takes your eyesight away from the render making that the new focal.

With that said you are getting much much better in making these signatures, keep it up! I can't imagine it will be too long before your tags are looking truly stunning with the rate your going! In your next piece I would focus on working the background and creating some depth (remember to build depth from the ground up).

Good luck man!

[dillinger]

chears man,did a update,think it turned out beter..

[Gravity]

i think you need to get rid of that white lighting on his face, i agree v2 is better, but i dont like that white