The background is good but the text is rubbish im afraid so play with that a bit and the line of flames across it just really don't fit in but the semi-circle flames are a nice touch. i think the avator is okay except for the moon thing also i think that that semi-circle would make a good avator (with your name some where on it) keep on going we all start somewhere and maybe spend more time than 20mins

P.s. i know you probaly think that he cant really talk because he hasnt got a sig and avator but i hve and hvin trouble uploading