effects overkill..
too much; sometimes less is more!
edit:
advice:
when done with your tag... make all layers invisible.
then make m visible one by one or start swapping one by one..
then see what is best working for your tag...
edit 2:
it misses .. I dunno something smexy.. tis a nice tag but..
have a look at c4pro's work.. you are close to that..!
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