you have way too much space ont he right you need your name or quote thre really mate

the render aint bad tho her head seems to just stop on the left lol blending is ok colour is fine but i dont know just something about it maybe if it ws a better colour or multicolored? make the render the colour its ment to be and try and make the bg fit in with the render its what i normally try and do

brushing is good but in 1/2parts it just seems to be empty

hope the feed back helps