Hmm , i like the way the background looks, the text i don't like though. It doesn't go with the feel of the picture. Maybe find a specialised font with some really cool effects?
www.dafont.com YOu should be able to get one there.

The renders look pretty cool, but i feel that girls only go with more crazed sort of images.. like hippy stuff.

Nice job 7.5/10