I love it!

Its very rare that you see a poem of that class of beauty and meaning

It reminds me of my old best friend from my old school, i havent had any contact with her since the last day of school the year before i changed schools

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I think this would be a better way to arrange the lines and stanzas, just my opinion though, you dont have to do it:


A picture of you,
and all I see,
is the empty shell
of what used to be.

Those days when we
would laugh and play,
and wished it to never
go away.

I was childish think we could have what we used to.
After all, i stand here, alone and still,
while you're so far away,
an empty space,
I'll never fill.