limbo lagoon

[undertone]

only post work was making it look a little dreamy, pretty much just a heavy blur with the layer set to lighten. this time i made it while listening to the song in limbo.
comments, suggestions, critique?

[CrazyGamer]

It looks great cept for this giant calm spot in the water that sticks out like a sore thumb.

[undertone]

thanks man. i dunno why thats there, but ill try and not have one next time (i wish the preview screen was bigger).

[shajn]

On this one, the water needs some changes, it looks simply to plain. Also the clouds could change a little. But I erally like the shadow you have managed to get on it and the sun shining beside the mountains to give a nice shadow effect. Good work.

[Moshiur]

lol I love how you name your stuff. I like the render. Try changing the how the water looks. And for your next piece, try adding a bit more detail to the landscape. Good job nonetheless.

[PenguinElitist]

More detail to the landscape, as already said, and that island on the left looks really artificial the way it comes down into the water. The water isn't too realistic, but it does look good for what you were going for. Great job man, keep it up!

[katgirl21]

Yay! You liked the name i thought of!

I think you should somehow make the mountains look less polygonish (too many straight lines)

[Xtremerunnerars]

Looks great to me, only thing i'd change is that calm spot, but idk how you'd change it.

[undertone]

alright, thanks guys! gotta get to work on my water i guess. and ill try to make those mountains less polygonish.

thanks!