k, well for starters good job on at least saving it as jpg. Thats often the first mistake for ppl that try to make popouts. Anywho her hand is cut off, try and fix that. The bg seems to "wide" bc your render is so tall and slender, theres so much dead space at the sides. Also while your bg color goes along nicely with her bikini, the bg stands out WAY to much. Alot of white and alot of contrast as well, and is it just me or do you always use that font? just curious