hm, this looks kind of weird. It's hard to see the details in the picture since it's changed to waterpaint. Did you take the "jungle-photo" yourself ? Then could you post the original picture, to compare, and see the result. I'm not sure that the "ghosts" should be non-waterpainted, I think they would flow more if they were, but it's also hard to see if it is. It's really hard to comment overall, since I can't really tell how much work you've laid down, and how hard it was. I kinda like the look of the jungle though.