Ipod chick with gun

[natso]

cant fix the pixelated wires.. but i made yet an other )

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9573/ipodgirl3tt.jpg

[RoughDraft]

take black lines off top enough black as there is fix her leg at bottom and maybe that back foot

[B][G K]

magic wand for cutouts = bad quality. may i suggest learning to use the pen tool for smoother lines and a better overall appearance.

[Dr D-Mento]

yummy... lol... Jagged a bit, yes, but good job nonetheless...

[undertone]

definatly learn the pen tool if your going to do work like this, it makes it look alot cleaner, and you can resize it if you need to. interesting idea, just going about the wrong way of doing it.

[BLiZZ]

yea i agree with undertone - also with the ipod...there are sooo many great tuts teachin u how to make a really cool ipod...check those out some time to help at goodtutorials.com

but overall good idea

[Samuel]

Cool idea, good work, but bad try.

Use the pen tool. Great idea... just didn't use it well.

[iceryu]

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magic wand for cutouts = bad quality. may i suggest learning to use the pen tool for smoother lines and a better overall appearance.

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Originally posted by undertone@5 Hours Ago
definatly learn the pen tool if your going to do work like this, it makes it look alot cleaner, and you can resize it if you need to. interesting idea, just going about the wrong way of doing it.

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Cool idea, good work, but bad try.

Use the pen tool. Great idea... just didn&#39;t use it well.

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like they all said THE PEN TOOL ........actually since ur just making the whole thing black and yellow........you should have used the pen tool. nice idea thou

[Elleray]

yeah, im not going to repeat what they all said, so ill say this, it looks like you used the pencil tool to do the wires, and the ipod doesnt really look like an ipod, no click wheel, and the corners are too rounded. original peice although

[natso]

k thanks everybody, i like making ipod style vectors and i try to make them original.. i will try to make a good ipod to go with my next try, thanks all

edit: i have a problem though... i first didn&#39;t want to make the black lines in the bikini, but if i didn&#39;t yu couldn&#39;t see her breast... how can i fix this?

edit 2: how do i save an img as JPG in illustrator, i think im not doing it the right way...